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MidoridislikesSJ
December 19th, 2008, 12:19 am

Last prologue page : ) Next week we can start chapter one!

I apologize in advance for the upcoming shifts in drawing style... I'm trying to figure out the best way to compensate for the fact that my lineart sucks terribly xD

On another note, Bea looks a little young to be controlling half of the galaxy, doesn't she?

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Prank
December 19th, 2008, 12:36 am

But your lineart is great D:>

Practice makes perfect though so I'm looking forward to chapter one :)

Babyfaced? It's always good to start young on galaxy domination such a thing being a demanding task.

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MidoridislikesSJ
December 19th, 2008, 12:47 am

the lineart is stylistically chunky to cover up the fact that I can't do lineart to save my life [/secret] I can only hope that practicing in an actual comic will help me improve on a lot of artistic things : )

(and you'd think that galaxy domination would really take it out of you.. maybe making her look like the crypt-keeper might have been a better way to go xDD )

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Prank
December 19th, 2008, 1:10 am

I like the thick lineart personally, I remember my art teacher saying it wasn't a bad thing but I forgot the reason why.

Realistically, maybe. Fictionally, nah.

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Naoka
December 19th, 2008, 5:55 am

I love this, your story is actually original to me - (it is a bummer when everything yu read is the same stuff spewd in a different form) this is actually refreshing ^o^
Also thankz for faving my manga *huggles*
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

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MidoridislikesSJ
December 19th, 2008, 11:18 am

@Prank: psshhh... art teachers.. what do they know, anyway? It's not like they went to school to learn about art or anything :p

@Naoka: Thanks O__O Your comic is really original too... I love Yoh <333 he's so cute... I still can't get over how well you can draw horses/horse half of centaurs... it's really good. So... YOU KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK TOO! xDD

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Prank
December 19th, 2008, 2:06 pm

That's what I say! Then I get sent to the corner ;_;

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Oranges_and_Pears
December 19th, 2008, 2:11 pm

Wow, sounds really interesting! Reminds me of the sort of thing I had in mind for a story I'm starting soon...I hope. ^^'

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MidoridislikesSJ
December 19th, 2008, 3:15 pm

@ Prank: Rebel, I say! You can call it an "Artistic Revolution" and start throwing paint at everyone xD

@Oranges_and_Pears: Start it! : D I'll read it...

I think I need to read more sci-fi/military stuff... my father's in the military... and I've played Halo.. that's about the extent of my knowledge on the subjects xD

The good thing about the mix of these genres is that you can make things up left and right, and people can't argue with you... 'cause it's sci-fi-ish.... and how do they know that it hasn't been invented a good three thousand years in the future? xD

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still looking good!

Idene
December 19th, 2008, 9:54 pm

she does look a little young, but hey, in a lot of shounen mangas, almost all of the main characters have super powers before they're an adult. XD

i should really start a comic methinks. i've got a couple good ideas, and i want to do graphic novelizations of Stranger than Fiction, and Breakdown.

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MidoridislikesSJ
December 20th, 2008, 12:24 am

Stranger than Fiction? Breakdown? I feel really retarded... I don't know what those are xD Enlighten me, please?

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faceofdoomness
December 22nd, 2008, 11:04 pm

They both be movies!

Anyways, she looks rather young to be controlling half of the empire but there's something about her that casts and overcasting feeling that she has some kind of power about her. O_O

Anyways, the art is magnificent and nicely drawn! Also love the layout for this page. Great job!

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Idene
March 21st, 2009, 10:20 pm

ah, so sorry, never read the comments again for three months. >_<

Faceofdoomness is half right. Stranger Than Fiction is a most awesome movie, and Breakdown, while there is a movie under that name, is also a videogame that is most awesome! for the xbox, and didn't get half the attention it deserved sadly. =_=

anyway, i've got a very good idea for an original comic all my own! X3