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MidoridislikesSJ
September 9th, 2009, 11:08 pm

I'm not too thrilled with this page... it came out kinda funny, and I really just want to push on with the story but if I did that then later it won't be as meaningful : / I'm so impatient sometimes...

anyway, I kinda need my wonderful readers' help real quick. As you may or may not know, I'm using a different computer monitor right now while I'm working in florida for the next five months. The problem is that things look a lot different on this monitor than they did on my normal one. So, if you have a minute, could you please, please, please drop a comment and tell me if the shading/darkness of the page is consistent with the others, or if I have to mess with it a bit... I would really appreciate it!!!!

As always, thanks so much for your support and readership!!!

Midori

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Imi
September 9th, 2009, 11:40 pm

The shading does seem a little dark, hough I think it's your choice of grey tone--the base you're using for skin makes them look as though they're sitting in total darkness, which I'm...not sure is your intention. Lightening the colour you've used on the walls, seeing as they have dark skin, should fix this? (I think, hurr)

Lovely page as always~ You do such wonderful expression.

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MidoridislikesSJ
September 10th, 2009, 12:01 am

Oh wow! Not only did I get a response, I got a really in-depth one xDD Thanks Imi!! I understand what you mean... I'll be sure to take care with that on the next page : ) I really appreciate the help~

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Andromeda
September 11th, 2009, 11:10 am

Agree with IMI. Just pass it off by saying it's high-drama, so you made it look dark and dangerous. xD

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Devi (Guest)
September 18th, 2009, 8:03 pm

aosghaoghag! :DDDD I was so happy to find this page here. I didn't know you updated!

It's a bit darker than the usual pages but I don't think it's too bad. Anything else I say, IMI's probably already said. xD

I love your characters! :) And story!

Um, that is all.

<3,
Devi